Possible New Players

Hey Knight Realms i am a possible new player to the game, and might bring a friend as well. We both live in Toronto, Canada so its a long journey to get down there for the weekend lol but im sure it will be worth it! Me and my friend are 15 and the only Toronto larp destination that let our age play closed down. We are hoping to make it out this year but if not definitely next year. I just finished reading all the rules and came up with 2 sets of PCs for me and my friend to play. I thought it would be a good idea to post the builds here so people can give me some tips as well as correct any mistakes in the builds.

SET 1: Keepers Of The Woods

Ranger (Elf):
Bow 0
Befriend animal 0
Lore: Forest 0
Tracking 1
Cloak of Green 5
1 Handed Edged 2
9 Body Points 3
Set Trap 2

Druid (Elf)
Bow 0
Befriend animal 0
Lore: Forest 0
First/Second Domain 0
Lore: Druid 1
Cure Minor Wounds 1
Grasp of the Roots 1
7 Druid Points 7

SET 2: Young Rouges

Thief (Hobbit):
Trade: Cook 0
Throwing Weapons 0
Disarm Trap 2
Pick Basic Locks 1
Pick Complex Locks 2
Detect Traps 2
Basic Entry Escape 2
Fence 1

Thief (Hobbit):
Trade: Cook 0
Throwing Weapons 0
Small Weapons 1
Fence 1
Waylay 3
Basic Disguise 3
Pick Pocket 1
Flee 2
Set Traps 2

As you may notice one player in each set has 13 build points and the other has 10, one will pay for the extra point, as well as get the +2 points from referral of the other player.