A Narrative
- Sergei Petsho
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29 Jul 2014 01:12 #1
by Sergei Petsho (Bran MacInnes)
"What do you take me for? Some kind of big damn hero?"
Sergei Petsho, Voivode and Steward of Inovar, Owner and Masseur Extraordinaire of Magic Hands Massage.
"What, it's for my research, I swear!"
Nigel Whitworth, Gentleman Apothecary
"Here, kid, suck on this and shut up for a while."
Aengus MacAengus Hesperus, Professional Old Person
OOG: Chris Zipeto
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A Narrative was created by Sergei Petsho (Bran MacInnes)
Toy soldiers in rank and file
Marching down mouldering steps
To breathe in a casket
Brimstone-stained hubris
The dead walk
The screams of others echoing inside
Bloodlust
Blind joy in battle
The crunch of bones satisfying their primal urges
Sneering pride turned tail
Steel tips sing their pursuit
A mocking grin turned panicked frown
Screaming, swirling chaos
Frantic flight and cries for aid
Thoughtless slaughter of shattering souls
A last stand
A final blow
It is not over, but merely just begun
A gathering up of baubles
Mere trinkets to satisfy magpie eyes
Carelessly neglecting of consequences macabre
A soul
A shell
A creation of horror
Death and life
In synchronous dance
A perilous balance precariously kept
Pleas ignored
Balance kept
Waiting in apprehension
Aid is brought
Though relief is short
A bullheaded ignorance of knowledge freely offered
Dismissal
Lacking discussion
Solutions considered and tossed aside
A postponement of resolution
A stopgap measure enacted
A bandage on a gaping wound
40 souls have been obliterated
Each put on the chopping block by a madman
But the axe swung by supposed heroes
S
Marching down mouldering steps
To breathe in a casket
Brimstone-stained hubris
The dead walk
The screams of others echoing inside
Bloodlust
Blind joy in battle
The crunch of bones satisfying their primal urges
Sneering pride turned tail
Steel tips sing their pursuit
A mocking grin turned panicked frown
Screaming, swirling chaos
Frantic flight and cries for aid
Thoughtless slaughter of shattering souls
A last stand
A final blow
It is not over, but merely just begun
A gathering up of baubles
Mere trinkets to satisfy magpie eyes
Carelessly neglecting of consequences macabre
A soul
A shell
A creation of horror
Death and life
In synchronous dance
A perilous balance precariously kept
Pleas ignored
Balance kept
Waiting in apprehension
Aid is brought
Though relief is short
A bullheaded ignorance of knowledge freely offered
Dismissal
Lacking discussion
Solutions considered and tossed aside
A postponement of resolution
A stopgap measure enacted
A bandage on a gaping wound
40 souls have been obliterated
Each put on the chopping block by a madman
But the axe swung by supposed heroes
S
"What do you take me for? Some kind of big damn hero?"
Sergei Petsho, Voivode and Steward of Inovar, Owner and Masseur Extraordinaire of Magic Hands Massage.
"What, it's for my research, I swear!"
Nigel Whitworth, Gentleman Apothecary
"Here, kid, suck on this and shut up for a while."
Aengus MacAengus Hesperus, Professional Old Person
OOG: Chris Zipeto
Storyteller
- Grimkjell Eirson
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29 Jul 2014 01:38 #2
by Grimkjell Eirson (BillHannings)
Replied by Grimkjell Eirson (BillHannings) on topic A Narrative
Not bad, Skald. I owe you some coin for this next feast, I think. We should discuss your work.
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29 Jul 2014 03:31 - 29 Jul 2014 03:32 #3
by Chesta (Kevin)
Chesta Hartwick MazoKisei
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The children train
Growing with blades
All for pain
Blood is spilled
People suffer
From the heroes hilt
From blinding light
To choking darkness
All men must fight
Good or bad
Light or dark
It's the people who hide
For they wait and hope
Beg and pray
That a hero will save the day
But no call is answered
So the people die
Believing in a lie
Heroes are fake
Pain is always felt
We play the hand we are dealt
For life is fleeting
Time is fading
And blood is what we are paying
We find our place
We find our destiny
So that we may earn a face
Growing with blades
All for pain
Blood is spilled
People suffer
From the heroes hilt
From blinding light
To choking darkness
All men must fight
Good or bad
Light or dark
It's the people who hide
For they wait and hope
Beg and pray
That a hero will save the day
But no call is answered
So the people die
Believing in a lie
Heroes are fake
Pain is always felt
We play the hand we are dealt
For life is fleeting
Time is fading
And blood is what we are paying
We find our place
We find our destiny
So that we may earn a face
Chesta Hartwick MazoKisei
Last edit: 29 Jul 2014 03:32 by Chesta (Kevin). Reason: mistake on spacing
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29 Jul 2014 11:59 #4
by Sergei Petsho (Bran MacInnes)
"What do you take me for? Some kind of big damn hero?"
Sergei Petsho, Voivode and Steward of Inovar, Owner and Masseur Extraordinaire of Magic Hands Massage.
"What, it's for my research, I swear!"
Nigel Whitworth, Gentleman Apothecary
"Here, kid, suck on this and shut up for a while."
Aengus MacAengus Hesperus, Professional Old Person
OOG: Chris Zipeto
Storyteller
Replied by Sergei Petsho (Bran MacInnes) on topic A Narrative
Hold your scribblings, boy. There was a point to my writings. An actual tale told. A warning given.
If you wish to pen verses extolling virtues of pacifism, do so elsewhere. And at a time where you have learned to use your words in a manner fitting a grown man, rather than an angst-ridden child.
I applaud your attempt to better yourself with the written word, but this is not a schoolhouse task, given to you to write with slate and chalk.
S
If you wish to pen verses extolling virtues of pacifism, do so elsewhere. And at a time where you have learned to use your words in a manner fitting a grown man, rather than an angst-ridden child.
I applaud your attempt to better yourself with the written word, but this is not a schoolhouse task, given to you to write with slate and chalk.
S
"What do you take me for? Some kind of big damn hero?"
Sergei Petsho, Voivode and Steward of Inovar, Owner and Masseur Extraordinaire of Magic Hands Massage.
"What, it's for my research, I swear!"
Nigel Whitworth, Gentleman Apothecary
"Here, kid, suck on this and shut up for a while."
Aengus MacAengus Hesperus, Professional Old Person
OOG: Chris Zipeto
Storyteller
- Not An Assassin
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29 Jul 2014 13:49 #5
by Not An Assassin (Salem)
Salem Noire, Lieutenant Commander of the Blood Spirits
Lieutenant Leon Drekken of House Zezima
OOG-Reece Belmont
Replied by Not An Assassin (Salem) on topic A Narrative
How familiar this is to me more and more as I read it to myself.
And how I wish more to interpret it as I do.
To those lacking the knowledge; it is...Interesting...Nonetheless.
Bravo,
-J
And how I wish more to interpret it as I do.
To those lacking the knowledge; it is...Interesting...Nonetheless.
Bravo,
-J
Salem Noire, Lieutenant Commander of the Blood Spirits
Lieutenant Leon Drekken of House Zezima
OOG-Reece Belmont
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