April highlights- round one
- geezer

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17 years 9 months ago #5555
by geezer (geezer)
Edwin Haroldson
Loremaster
Master of the Mages' Guild
An ethical person does the right thing when no one is watching.
OOG - Charlie Spiegel - Kitchen Marshal
"War is a matter of vital importance to the State..."
Replied by geezer (geezer) on topic April highlights- round one
You make the gratuitous assumption that merely because I was aware of the pain my body was experiencing I was not immersed in the moment.
Edwin Haroldson
Loremaster
Master of the Mages' Guild
An ethical person does the right thing when no one is watching.
OOG - Charlie Spiegel - Kitchen Marshal
"War is a matter of vital importance to the State..."
- Daedri

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17 years 9 months ago #5570
by Daedri (Daedri)
Daedri Elensar
Shipwright to the People
Craig Odell
Replied by Daedri (Daedri) on topic April highlights- round one
Your on your own this time Charlie, good luck. *walks far, far away*
Daedri Elensar
Shipwright to the People
Craig Odell
- Woolsey Bysmor

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17 years 9 months ago #5573
by Woolsey Bysmor (Osred)
-OOG Michael Smith
Replied by Woolsey Bysmor (Osred) on topic April highlights- round one
It is only fitting that Paul should succeed where others fail... I imagine the scene went like this (Sorry Jon for casting you as a reverand mother...)
REVEREND MOTHER
(using The Voice)
Now you come here.
Paul finds he cannot help but obey her, yet he
fights her controlling him.
PAUL
(inner voice)
She's using The Voice.
(out loud)
No.
She sees him struggling.
REVEREND MOTHER
(inner voice)
Some strength there. Surprising!
(out loud)
Come here.
The Reverend Mother holds up a green metal cube.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
See this... Put your right hand in the
box.
Paul stares at the hole in the box.
--
PAUL
What's in the box?
REVEREND MOTHER
Pain.
Just then, she raises one hand to his neck. Paul
sees a glint of metal. He tries to back away.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
(The Voice)
STOP! Put your hand in the box.
Paul's hand goes in. Fear passes over his face.
PAUL
(inner voice)
The Voice again.
REVEREND MOTHER
I hold at your neck the gom jabbar. Don't
pull away or you'll feel that poison. A
Duke's son must know about many poisons --
this one kills only animals.
PAUL
Are you suggesting a Duke's son is an
animal?
REVEREND MOTHER
Let us say I suggest you may be human.
Your awareness may be powerful enough to
control your instincts. Your instincts
will be to remove your hand from the box.
If you do so you will die. You will feel
an itching -- there... see? Now the
itching becomes burning... heat, upon
heat, upon heat.
PAUL
(whispering)
It burns.
REVEREND MOTHER
SILENCE... SILENCE.
PAUL
(inner voice)(struggling to compose
himself)
I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little death that brings total
obliteration. I will face my fear... I
will permit it to pass over me and through
me.
--
The Reverend Mother moves her face up to his. Her
ancient face with its metal teeth gleaming inches
away breathes hotly. She is smiling.
REVEREND MOTHER
You feel the flesh crisping?
36. THE HAND - PAUL'S MENTAL IMAGE
Paul's inner mind sees his hand on fire with all
sorts of sores. The skin is bubbling.
37. INT. JESSICA'S CHAMBER - CASTLE CALADAN - NIGHT
REVEREND MOTHER
Flesh dropping off.
38. THE HAND - PAUL'S MENTAL IMAGE
He pictures this. The destruction of his hand is
complete -- now only blood spurts out and burns.
39. INT. JESSICA'S CHAMBER - CASTLE CALADAN - NIGHT
Paul's face registers extreme pain.
PAUL
(cannot help the explosion)
THE PAIN!
REVEREND MOTHER
NO!! ENOUGH!! Kull wahad! No woman child
ever withstood that much. I must have
wanted you to fail. Take your hand out of
the box and look at it, young human.... Do
it!
Paul pulls his hand out of the box. No sign of
anything wrong. He turns his hand, flexes his
fingers. He looks to the Reverend Mother.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
(explaining)
Pain by nerve induction... A human can
resist any pain. Our test is crisis and
observation.
PAUL
I see the truth of it.
REVEREND MOTHER
(using The Voice)
Now you come here.
Paul finds he cannot help but obey her, yet he
fights her controlling him.
PAUL
(inner voice)
She's using The Voice.
(out loud)
No.
She sees him struggling.
REVEREND MOTHER
(inner voice)
Some strength there. Surprising!
(out loud)
Come here.
The Reverend Mother holds up a green metal cube.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
See this... Put your right hand in the
box.
Paul stares at the hole in the box.
--
PAUL
What's in the box?
REVEREND MOTHER
Pain.
Just then, she raises one hand to his neck. Paul
sees a glint of metal. He tries to back away.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
(The Voice)
STOP! Put your hand in the box.
Paul's hand goes in. Fear passes over his face.
PAUL
(inner voice)
The Voice again.
REVEREND MOTHER
I hold at your neck the gom jabbar. Don't
pull away or you'll feel that poison. A
Duke's son must know about many poisons --
this one kills only animals.
PAUL
Are you suggesting a Duke's son is an
animal?
REVEREND MOTHER
Let us say I suggest you may be human.
Your awareness may be powerful enough to
control your instincts. Your instincts
will be to remove your hand from the box.
If you do so you will die. You will feel
an itching -- there... see? Now the
itching becomes burning... heat, upon
heat, upon heat.
PAUL
(whispering)
It burns.
REVEREND MOTHER
SILENCE... SILENCE.
PAUL
(inner voice)(struggling to compose
himself)
I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little death that brings total
obliteration. I will face my fear... I
will permit it to pass over me and through
me.
--
The Reverend Mother moves her face up to his. Her
ancient face with its metal teeth gleaming inches
away breathes hotly. She is smiling.
REVEREND MOTHER
You feel the flesh crisping?
36. THE HAND - PAUL'S MENTAL IMAGE
Paul's inner mind sees his hand on fire with all
sorts of sores. The skin is bubbling.
37. INT. JESSICA'S CHAMBER - CASTLE CALADAN - NIGHT
REVEREND MOTHER
Flesh dropping off.
38. THE HAND - PAUL'S MENTAL IMAGE
He pictures this. The destruction of his hand is
complete -- now only blood spurts out and burns.
39. INT. JESSICA'S CHAMBER - CASTLE CALADAN - NIGHT
Paul's face registers extreme pain.
PAUL
(cannot help the explosion)
THE PAIN!
REVEREND MOTHER
NO!! ENOUGH!! Kull wahad! No woman child
ever withstood that much. I must have
wanted you to fail. Take your hand out of
the box and look at it, young human.... Do
it!
Paul pulls his hand out of the box. No sign of
anything wrong. He turns his hand, flexes his
fingers. He looks to the Reverend Mother.
REVEREND MOTHER (CONT'D)
(explaining)
Pain by nerve induction... A human can
resist any pain. Our test is crisis and
observation.
PAUL
I see the truth of it.
-OOG Michael Smith
- Janus

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17 years 9 months ago #5574
by Janus (Janus)
Janus Ivillious
Court Sorcerer of Winterdark
Every man has his own destiny: the only imperative is to follow it, to accept it, no matter where it leads him.
Mike Dennis
RP Marshal
Replied by Janus (Janus) on topic April highlights- round one
Mike Smith, why are you so sweet?
Janus Ivillious
Court Sorcerer of Winterdark
Every man has his own destiny: the only imperative is to follow it, to accept it, no matter where it leads him.
Mike Dennis
RP Marshal
- Liz

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17 years 9 months ago #5576
by Liz (Liz)
Replied by Liz (Liz) on topic April highlights- round one
I love you!
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17 years 9 months ago #5581
by Bladesworn (Bladesworn)
IG: Tyran Radley
Vassal of Alisandria
OOG: Paul Y.
Replied by Bladesworn (Bladesworn) on topic April highlights- round one
OMFG!
Other than Jon not being a Reverend Mother and my hand actually did get minorly damaged, it's pretty close to what happened.
LOL!
Other than Jon not being a Reverend Mother and my hand actually did get minorly damaged, it's pretty close to what happened.
LOL!IG: Tyran Radley
Vassal of Alisandria
OOG: Paul Y.
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