Need A Poem Written? Hire Jack Dimms!

Ah, a lot of postings to answer. Well, let's get started. Caldor, I did not take what you said with offense. Matter of fact you are right and I was going to post back to explain deeper in ways people without the ability to write could as word of mouth spreads and they coul get someone who they trust to missive me in order to write something for them.

As for Miss Drexel I will write one up and show them in my next posting.

Sir Cypher, Yes and this is true, at the same time though someone could end up in the dungeon for insulting you. You command respect. It'll be a long ways til I can make a run for becoming a noble I know that fact. But in time the naysayers shall see.

Signed, With Truth,
Jack Dimms.

(Written on semi-fancy looking parchment, though the handwriting is pretty dismal)

Untitled

The winds howl to the new coming of season
Where we have fought through war, and death, and pseudo-treason
I have believed in this season for quite some time
As spring has come forward and to that so has time
It is now time to love, time to lust, time to clean
Time to embrace nature and all the beauty you can see
Beauty unmatched like the soft cheek of Miss Drexel
Catching a glimpse of the sunset as you stand next to
Your lover or mother clutching upon a family saked treasure
So take a deep breath in because Spring is here for our pleasure.

Signed, With Truth,
Jack Dimms

Not bad. Keep working at the craft and you'll be a skald yet. Try some kennings next time.

I agree with Grim here. Not bad though I had to chuckle that you included the old salt soldier that I am in there. I see some potential there though I'm no scholar for such things. I read it and reacted which is what any artist wants. Good luck Jack Dimms!

B. Drexel